"The narration didn't have enough umph to it. It sounded kind of like reading out loud with little emphasis. Would have been cool to see him doing other bad things (lying) with the narration to show the fact that he's a liar. Thanks for the submission! "
Description: "A teen's lies finally catch up to him with fiery results. A Short Film by Joseph Stallcop Music by Kevin MacLeod "Decline" http://www.incompetech.com"
Submitted: June 1st, 2013
Scorched
by ToolBox
scorch (sk?rch) v. scorched, scorch?ing, scorch?es v.tr. - To destroy by by fire so as to leave nothing salvageable
1479 views1 reviews12 votes
Burning Truth
by JSHORRORS
A teen's lies finally catch up to him with fiery results. A Short Film by Joseph Stallcop Music by Kevin MacLeod "Decline" http://www.incompetech.com
1477 views1 reviews5 votes
by Smoking Barrel Production
Genre: Any
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Smoking Barrel Production | 19 |
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Woody
by Smoking Barrel Production
Pinocchio, a drug dealer, is under suspicion of being an undercover cop. How will he get out of t...
12,687 views5 reviews19 votes