"I loved the idea of joy that comes from completing the carving, but in the last shot maybe the pumpkin could of hit the ground a bit sooner so there was time to feel the characters pain and maybe slowing the second shot right down when he drops it. " read replies
Description: "Eager young boy wishes to carve the best pumpkin but gets spooked at the worst time - My first Haiku"
Submitted: October 30th, 2013
The Pumkin Smasher
by Who writes this stuff?
A night in the life of an avid pumpkin smasher.
12,793 views5 reviews19 votes
Timmy
by Core Four
Timmy and his friends play a delightful game of baseball.
1540 views2 reviews10 votes
The Death of Mr. Pumpki
by Morguetorium
Mr. Pumpkin's last minutes before his untimely death. We just never see the "Trick" in "Trick or Treat" do we?
1537 views1 reviews6 votes
Hypnotic Pumpkin
by PlotMakers
Only one man knows of the hypnotic powers of the conmen pumpkin, he strives to rid the world of them or is he mad?
1351 views2 reviews5 votes
by Who writes this stuff?
Genre: Haiku
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Who writes this stuff? | 19 |
The Phantom Monk | 15 |
Number 3 Productions | 6 |
The Pumkin Smasher
by Who writes this stuff?
A night in the life of an avid pumpkin smasher.
12,793 views5 reviews19 votes