
"I loved the idea of joy that comes from completing the carving, but in the last shot maybe the pumpkin could of hit the ground a bit sooner so there was time to feel the characters pain and maybe slowing the second shot right down when he drops it. " read replies


Description: "Eager young boy wishes to carve the best pumpkin but gets spooked at the worst time - My first Haiku"
Submitted: October 30th, 2013

The Pumkin Smasher
by Who writes this stuff?
A night in the life of an avid pumpkin smasher.
12,962 views5 reviews19 votes

Timmy
by Core Four
Timmy and his friends play a delightful game of baseball.
1595 views2 reviews10 votes

The Death of Mr. Pumpki
by Morguetorium
Mr. Pumpkin's last minutes before his untimely death. We just never see the "Trick" in "Trick or Treat" do we?
1598 views1 reviews6 votes

Hypnotic Pumpkin
by PlotMakers
Only one man knows of the hypnotic powers of the conmen pumpkin, he strives to rid the world of them or is he mad?
1410 views2 reviews5 votes


by Who writes this stuff?
Genre: Haiku
Group | Votes |
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Who writes this stuff? | 19 |
The Phantom Monk | 15 |
Number 3 Productions | 6 |
The Pumkin Smasher
by Who writes this stuff?
A night in the life of an avid pumpkin smasher.
12,962 views5 reviews19 votes